Saturday, December 29, 2007

Caught in Loneliness

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Do you remember the old days?

When we used to talk every day,

When we used to laugh every day,

I would never forget those days.

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Like teenagers in love, we were mad;

Those incredible dreams we had;

With you nothing at all seems bad;

Those days are long gone, yet so sad.

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Dreaming about you is my passion;

In that, I don’t want any regression;

From no one, I need any compassion;

Without you, I’m in severe depression.

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Dreams we had; lying on the beach,

Moonlit night, on the sandy beach,

To be alone, far from anyone’s reach,

For each other, we were peach.

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Life would’ve been much better together,

Without me, you’ve gone further,

Thoughts and heartbeat, making life wither,

I’m lonely with feelings, trying to smother.

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Cheers!!

Hammett

9 comments...please!!!:

hudhuhandhu said...

oh u poor poor soul! No wonder u have insomnia ;)
nice work though!
though reliving some of the childhood memories can make u cringe =P

.mini said...

its a nice poem.. :D

Hammett said...

hudhuhandhu... u got a point there... thanx....

mini... thanks to u...

butter said...

heyyyyyy thats such a niiiiiiiice poem......very touchyyyyy

Radvixen said...

wow i love this one!

Hammett said...

thanks guys... last poem of the year is comin out soon :D cheers!!

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Ouch,that hurt!

Lovely piece of poetry there :)

Hammett said...

Sameera - Thank u!! :) nice to see you here..

shaffa said...

wow.. lovely.. wht a poetry...
very touching .. u can go much further in that;)