Wednesday, December 26, 2007

ENDLESS REMINISCENCE


Met through a chum, noticed at sight

Behind her back, exchanging bytes

Started with a laugh, leading to a flirt

Thousand miles apart, yet close at heart

***

Unreachable moments, made me forlorn

Waiting to see online, became the norm

Defying the situation, yearned to be together

Every moment treasured, in the cyber shelter

***

Journey back home, never got bored

Entranced in daydreams, over the globe

Sending short messages, back and forth

First prolonged kiss, delicacy and warmth

***

Ill-timed text message, insecure boyfriend

Losing all that mattered, despair descend

Yet no remorse, with abounding appetence

Cherishing the memories, in endless reminiscence

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Guys... that's my first poem. I would love to hear your say.

Cheers!!

Hammett


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10 comments...please!!!:

Shanu said...

Really cool and oh so familiar.. :)

I am all nostalgic now,its amazing how things are hardly the way you imagin them to be.. but as u said.. its all about not having regrets and cherishing the moments..

Hail Hail!

hudhuhandhu said...

summed up the norm of "modern" relationships ;)
cool poem..
keep em' comin.. :D

Hammett said...

thanks a lot guys...
cheers :))

Nightmare said...

yo! hammet cool blog you got here

Neobe said...

i liked the last line :>

THE END

kukulhu said...

so who is that on the other side of that window.....im anxious to know that...you might want to think on the vocabulary next time....for a poem

bulhaa said...

awww...sad story...
i liked the poem. agree with hudhuhandhu

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RannamaarI said...

whoa man u r awesome.... keep it commin man :)

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Hammett said...

nightmare: Thanx...

neobe: yea.. i liked that line too :P

kukulhu: wud take ur advise.. girl huh...

bulhaa: sad dhoa... thanks

anonymous: uh??? ur intense curiosity dhoa.... hehe..

rannamaari: thanks man.. would try...
thanks to all of u who read it...
cheers!!