Laying there lost in sensation,
Heart following music’s pulsation;
Locked in thoughts of uncertainty,
Will it be the same for eternity?
Mind would not rest at all, ever,
The exhausted body sometimes quiver.
All it need is a few hours of sleep!
Does it hear the sensations deep?
Cheers!!
Hammett
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19 comments...please!!!:
even when my body is sleeping, my mind is wide awake..
Keshi.
I know how many hrs u sleep! But I can't sleep tht much!
Keshi - thanks for sharing that.. :)
Yasser - ah, u know that... hehe.. that's good... i dont' sleep that much all the time though!! :)
you should try... cheers!!
I could go to sleep right now.
Take some benadryl..and start snoring within minutes!!
hmm.. i used to sleep aruond 2 or 3 at nights,,, even i have to wake up early!! :/.. nidhi naannanee hama...
nice poem though! cheers
Try some deep abdominal breathing lying straight. Will give you a restful sleep. Mind, body and soul!
Hammett i enjoy reading spontaneos poems but not so much the ones that rhyme! Maybe you cud experiment with a few other techniques as well... just a suggestion :)
nessa - of course, hehe.. :)
solitaire - I'm not a person of medication.. anyway if it gets to that level, I would take your advice... thanks.. :)
sunrise - yea, i can understand... thanks... ;)
Preeti - I've tried that..doesn't seem to work.. i'd try again... thanks for the suggestion.. Haiku - kind of old Japanese poetry.. been thinking about givin it a try... cheers!! :)
Sounds like someone was busy doing extracurricular activities when someone wrote this poem!!!!!
stop drinking that coffee - smoking that white thingy - it might just help - if not - start another blog for non sleep time
your exam stress is triggering your poetic being too..isn't that nice? heheh
well-written one...
anonymous - yep, that someone is me ;)
ceedy - I'd take the latter advice.. hehe.. thanks a lot . :)
Shaari - yea, it is... Thanks.. :)
aaaaaaaaaaah im so sleepy now.. good one =)
good one as for the poem.
but bad one as for not getting sleep :P
I think you should meet wee willie winky??? ;)
http://www.answers.com/topic/wee-willie-winkie
yep, it is something to think about.... the first thing our busy routine takes from us is SLEEP and we are too quick to ignore the most important thing we need.
Cool Post!
Cheers!
I-kko - is it that boring to make you sleepy.. hehe... ;)
Lena - Yeah... ups n downs... it would get better... :)
Bornfree - Who's wee willie winky.. hehe.. I'm gonna meet and find out what that is... thanx... :)
Raaji - yea... mostly like that.. glad u liked it.. cheers!! :)
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